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Fatal Princess was created from several parts of Fatal King's bones after the absolute loss of Fatal King's rebellion towards God. The Princess was created so that she could control King's emotion and slowly teach him to control by his own.
She had the same amount of power and able to use the magical Gylph that could expand into wings. Fatal King was unable to attack this princess because he could kill himself by doing so. He had ever attempted it, but ended up wounded terribly and being healed by the princess.

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Critiques


:iconmonochromewinter:
Seperti biasa. Teknik-mu khas banget..

Hal yang paling menonjol di sini adalah perubahan style rambut. Biasanya anda menggunakan tarikan garis yang kaku. Secara pribadi, saya lebih suka jika anda membuat rambut dengan model begini. Good job!! :love:

Kainnya juga bagus. Teksturnya mengalir dan luwes. Komposisi warna juga secara keseluruhan juga pas. Tambahan grafiknya juga bagus lho..

However, masih ada beberapa kekurangan.
1. Posisi mata kurang simetris. Masih miring.
2. Tangannya masih kurang bagus. jari-jarinya masih agak aneh.
3. Tambahan garis-garis acak putih itu, malah membuat gambar ceweknya gam menonjol. Malah jadi nggak fokus.

Nah, segitu aja.. =D
Bales kritik saya ya.. Maap kalo agak tajem..=D
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another beautifull piece from Bob,A nice concept add up with a nice design. Altough however there's a few tidbits I have to notice here..

the rough line building her feature doesn't really fit her image as the good one the design is already beautifull..but one can't really help being distracted by the dark rough outline especially on the hair..if I may add a sugestion perhaps a softer line may be more suitable for her..:)

altough this is already a beautifull piece as it is,but that doesn't mean no improvement to be made..and I believe Bob is more than capable to do this.
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OwO.......
no comet kk......
keren....
cuma kurang seksi....
seksi kesehatan......
walah ngaco.....
keren kk....
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She's so sweet!;)

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Thanks so much ^^ :XD: :excited:

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bagus..

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To be a person that like herself more..
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no comet??? akwkwkwkw:rofl:
kurang seksi ??? awkwkwkwk :iconteheplz:
keren??? ......>////<

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sangat kk>w<

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you're welcome! :iconredbullglompplz:

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thanks :XD:

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